2008年10月15日 星期三

Getting flu

Last weekend, I went home. I found that all my families had flu. At that time, I had some bad presentiment.

And then, it became true. After I went back to school few days, I found that I got a cold just like my families. Alas, I didn’t know how to express my feeling.

I had a running nose and almost coughed all the time. I swept my nose again and again and tried not to cough too loud that might disturb other people. I even could not concentrate in the class!

Luckily, after I went to see a doctor and getting some medicine, I got better and better. I still have a light cold now, but it doesn’t bother me at all.
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  1. Ben2008年11月6日 晚上7:27

    You've got a great struction of your article, and I think you've spend much time to decorate your blog, you've done a great job! I think that you can avoid using the word "and" and some surprised word as the beginning of the sentence, that will be much better.

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  2. White Cat2008年11月6日 晚上7:42

    Thank you for your suggestion. I will try hard to improve my writing skills.

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